I love Iax’s I’m-ever-so-fed-up with-this-world-so-I’m-going-to-kick-it pose
And Tiel’s hair….I’m still fixated by his hair…and his adorableness
Urm… I’m really confused so far. I couldn’t tell that the employee behind the counter was Gina, and when Gina was outside on the sidewalk, I couldn’t tell that she was a girl. I also can’t tell what the text says next to Tiel’s head in the first panel. And you said something about Gina’s snarky comment… What snarky comment? I don’t see one anywhere…
I’m sorry I made things confusing. Gina doesn’t have much in the way of feminine curves, and since she’s slouching and wearing loose clothing, anything she does have is hidden in that position. I don’t like drawing girls that are all ZOMG BOOBS so sometimes it’s difficult to tell them apart from the boys. orz It doesn’t help that polo shirts aren’t very flattering.
The “text” next to Tiel’s head says “FRIES” which was handwritten in the original art. It’s something I should have re-done when I was adding the word bubble text in photoshop. I draw all my comics on a single sheet of 11×17″ paper. Sometimes details get lost when the image is scaled down to be viewable on the website. Note to self: Only hand-write things when people are yelling.
The blog post mentioning the snarky comment was about page 4, the one that comes before this one. The text about the triple bypass was too small to read and has since been enlarged.
Again, sorry for being confusing. I’m still getting used to using wordpress/comicpress and drawing comics in this format. I appreciate your comments as they help me improve and fix anything that is unclear. I’ve already had people point out typos that I needed to fix.
I hope you continue to read my comic!
Oh… Oh, I found the triple bypass thing! How did I not notice that the first time I read this?? It was there the whole freaking time!! :O! And I *thought* that said fries…wasn’t sure though… ^_^
And also, I realized I didn’t read this from the very beginning…but now that I have, I’m even MORE confused!! D:???
I’m sorry if I was overcritical, I’m just über-confused… I really love the art though. Keep working on it, because I’m really interested to see where this goes! XD
I think WotW was just a way of introducing the characters. It might not actually be canon.
Correct! It is not canon. I’ve been meaning to find a way to move those strips to their own section of the site while preserving the comments.
Well I realize that NOW. -.- But I didn’t at first so I was confused.
I just noticed Iax drinking from the soda machine. XD I’ve always wanted to do that…
Third panel STILL makes it look like Gina has a beard… XD
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